it's like, i don't know, like, when i first saw the painting, i thought, like, this could be interesting, but then, i like, saw it a bit closer, and i like think that the figure is like too representational, and like the line does not blend in well enough. So then i like realised that perhaps if the figure was like a bit more abstact, and like a bit more geometrical, then it could be a bit more , like, unified. Ohh, and also, i like, wanna say that your painting it like....FUCKIN' SUCKS ROTTEN!